I think it’s safe to say that this project was a bit of a ‘rushed job’ due circumstances outside the course. Unfortunately its shows in your work, particularly in the area of design which instead of being the result of refined development has a more ‘made up on the spot feel’. However, I like your choice of topic it’s a funny and left field theme which illustrates your natural lean towards observational quirky humour – ‘Ten Steps to Being a Crazy Cat Person’ is an excellent starting title. It’s a shame there wasn’t more time to explore the potential of this idea in terms of design, animation, comedy, and tonality.
Rather than leaving more feedback here please arrange to see me when you get back from Prague to discuss how to successfully begin your Adaptation part B and regain any time / skill lost over the last few weeks and months.
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ReplyDeleteI think it’s safe to say that this project was a bit of a ‘rushed job’ due circumstances outside the course. Unfortunately its shows in your work, particularly in the area of design which instead of being the result of refined development has a more ‘made up on the spot feel’. However, I like your choice of topic it’s a funny and left field theme which illustrates your natural lean towards observational quirky humour – ‘Ten Steps to Being a Crazy Cat Person’ is an excellent starting title. It’s a shame there wasn’t more time to explore the potential of this idea in terms of design, animation, comedy, and tonality.
Rather than leaving more feedback here please arrange to see me when you get back from Prague to discuss how to successfully begin your Adaptation part B and regain any time / skill lost over the last few weeks and months.