Congrats on getting your first 2 reviews 'out there'. However, you do need to take another look at the Harvard system of referencing - principally, because you're putting the citation (the information in the brackets) before the quote - not directly after it, as it should be. Also, in terms of your choice of published sources in support of your reviews, I'm going to suggest that you dig a bit deeper and perhaps read more widely about these films before you undertake the review. There are a number of links to good sources for film reviews etc. on the brief, I'd encourage you to go exploring a bit more.
Hey George,
ReplyDeleteCongrats on getting your first 2 reviews 'out there'. However, you do need to take another look at the Harvard system of referencing - principally, because you're putting the citation (the information in the brackets) before the quote - not directly after it, as it should be. Also, in terms of your choice of published sources in support of your reviews, I'm going to suggest that you dig a bit deeper and perhaps read more widely about these films before you undertake the review. There are a number of links to good sources for film reviews etc. on the brief, I'd encourage you to go exploring a bit more.
Otherwise - onwards and upwards!